DISCLAIMER : All the characters in the story are fictitious.
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"TRUTH OR DARE ?
TRUTH OR DARE ?
TRUTH OR DARE ? "
...All three of them chanted in unison as the swirling bottle came to a standstill, pointing towards me. Choosing "Truth" is always the easy way out, not because i am not afraid to speak the truth but bacause who is to judge whether what i say is true or not.
"Dare!" I replied.
"Lets ask him to dance on the roads" was Vidushi's suggestion. Given a situation she is promised to behave in the most stereotypical ways.
"No yaar...yeh toh yeh saala kar lega". Now this was Nitin's statement. He would make sure that i got the worst task
"How about a strip tease on the road ?" Gaurav never meant what he said but his jokes had to have some element of nudity in them, he found them funny for reasons unknown to all the three of us.
While he was laughing at his own mention of strip tease, the rest of the folks poured in a whole lot of other wierd possibilities that they required me to do as part of the "Truth or Dare" game that we were playing. Some involving electricity, some involving my nipples and some involving both!!!
"You will have to get laid tonight" This had to be Gaurav again.
"Ya sure. Why not" My tone was intended to be satirical. It didnt come out quite the way I expected.
"Hey that does sounds fun. I mean you don't have to necessarily get laid. You just need to befriend someone present in this cafe." Now this was a more conservative one... understandable though... what else do you expect from a bunch of friends from Udaipur sitting in Leopold's cafe in Mumbai.
"Oh yaa... This sounds fun." Vidushi knew that my dating skills were highly questionable considering the fact how I had failed countless times in the past to date her. She always ended up embarrassed and now probably wanted to join the fun as she watched me woo another girl.
"Are you crazy. Its already late. We need to reach the hostel and besides I wouldn't ever be able to do it and what are you guys gonna do once I go."
"Its Mumbai remember darling. This city never sleeps. And waise bhi teri khushi me hi toh humaari khushi hain." Now that was Vidushi stating two cliche at once. I doubted if she ever used her brains. I doubted if she even had a brain.
"Her. Get her cell number" Gaurav had even chosen my prey. I wonder if he was even hearing my pleadings.
I turned back and there she was. She was gorgeous. Her dress flowed upto her knee. I could go on to describe her beauty but the first thing that ran across my mind was "WOAH... WAY OUT OF MY LEAGUE!!!" Is not that I have a league but... I don't know ...this "dare" was going to be impossible.
"Do it Denny", Nitin persisted.
"You know what they say in Udaipur... what happens in Mumbai, stays in Mumbai" though a modified cliché by Vidushi, it did make some sense. I thought what was the harm. And besides when was I ever going to get a chance to hit on a girl infront of Vidushi.
"I'll do it", I said.
I gathered myself up and walked towards her. I was still awestruck at her beauty and clueless as to how to begin. She saw me walking towards her and I could see the furious look in her eyes. “What did I do wrong now?” I asked myself. “Is it my walk? It is MY walk. I do walk like a jerk”
“What took you so long?” were her first words.
“Excuse me?” caught unaware, i was perplexed.
“You are Kritik right?” She enquired.
I wasnt Kritik. I wasnt Kritik at all. But I saw a very faint ray of hope here.
“Ummm.... Yes, I guess so” I said.
"Zaisha" She stretched out her hand.
I shook her hand as her name echoed in my ears. Zaisha.
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TO BE CONTINUED :)
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Sunday, February 21, 2010
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i m anxiously waiting for the next parts of this chronicle.....
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ReplyDeleteagree : "its not that i have a league or something..."
ReplyDeletedisagree : "What happens in Mumbai stays in Mumbai..." :P
P.S. Strip-tease on the roads is definitely funny !!!
This is not cool man ... leaving ppl hanging like that. And the story is interesting till this point :P
ReplyDeletewaiting fr the next part....
ReplyDeleteVery good, abhi agla part jaldi likh.
ReplyDelete@ partial blind : cool name... but would love it, if you could leave your real name :)... thanks a lot by the way.
ReplyDelete@ vishal : ya striptease is indeed very funny :)
@ yourdailycynic : the ":P" suggests sarcasm :)
@ pavan : next part is already done...will release in a week.
@ nikhil : next part is on its way. will come out in a week :)
more!
ReplyDeletei agree with yourdailycynic...post the next jaldi :)
ReplyDeleteDuh!itna hi!?!
ReplyDelete:whispering:
How much will u take to give me the rest of the story before others?
:P
@ gianttrashcan : can i call you chitu instead? :-P
ReplyDelete@ khushboo : blog pad rhi hain...EVS project papa se banwayegi kya?
thanks for the comments...and more coming up really soon :)
@ palashi :this is the first time someone offered me money for writing, so i would accept pretty much anything :)... i conduct reading sessions of my blog too but that would cost you extra :)
ReplyDeleteViranch is saying..
ReplyDeletenice1 (Y)..
waiting for the upcoming parts! better be nice :P
good 1....its quite interesting,i never knew u tried 2 date me b4...n i ws embarrassed..lolz!!..
ReplyDeletenw really luking forwrd for d next episode...
want to c hw u weirdly describe my reactions..:-)
WHEN U WILL BE RELEASING THE NEXT PART....?????????????????
ReplyDeletenext week...its almost done, i am just waiting for people to read this one and anticipate Zaisha :)
ReplyDeletenow you got to tell me...who are you?
hey..i a'ready told u dis one's gonna rock! ;)
ReplyDeletecool re..u really made this interestin.. n yeah..dont make dese ppl make wait longer!! zyada anxiety mat badhao sabki..!! x-(
:P
eagerly waitin 4 d next.. :)
interesting...waitin for more...
ReplyDeleteand all your stories have one thing in common...the guy always has bad luck with the women even though it starts of with promise... :)
ReplyDeletethat part i believe might be a lil autobiographical... is it????? :) :)
@ dreamer : I dont know. :)
ReplyDeleteI try keeping the two distinct but i guess its not working :)
@ dremer : btw, the end of this one is yet to come...so you never know if the guy has bad luck or not...who know...he might end up getting laid...keep you fingers crossed...atleast i am :)
ReplyDeletethe most imp. thing in ur writing is u know how to hold-up the nerves of the reader
ReplyDeleteyou project a simple incident in a very interesting way ....
that all i have to say man !!
hmm...getting laid means getting luck but the luck i am talkin about isnt the kind u interpret it to be...
ReplyDeletegetting lucky in love is different than getting laid and if this story even has the slightest hint of reality in it i am pretty sure the guy doesnt get laid.... :)
i guess you misinterpreted me...by getting laid i mean getting lucky here in love (in context of the story off course) and why does the guy cant get laid ??? the story will still remain real...India has a massive population..it didnt result without people getting laid :)
ReplyDeletei mean aisa nhi hain ki yeh impossible ho...its quite possible beta :)
@ andrew : thanks a lot :) loved your comment ;-P
ReplyDeletedenny hitting on a girl :O pretty hard to imagine...anyways waiting 4 the nxt part
ReplyDeleteP@ndey Gggg: bhai gajab.........dying waiting for the next part :O.......jaldi jaldi jaldi
ReplyDeleteThis reminds of the time when we played TDS in Rupi's Resort.
ReplyDeleteWaiting for next part...
oh ya i remember...long time :)
ReplyDeletewhere is part 2???
ReplyDeleteI don't know why but your writing reminds me of Gregory David Roberts's (only funnier :P) ... Keep up the good work !
ReplyDeleteplzzzz....grow up kiddos..
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